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Having
completed step one,
you should now have a rough idea of the elements you wish to include
in your essay, including your goals, important life experiences,
research experience, diversifying features, spectacular nonacademic
accomplishments, etc. You should also now have an idea of what impression
you want to make on the admissions officers.
We
should remark that at this stage, undergraduate applicants have
a large advantage over graduate school applicants. Whereas nobody
questions a high school student's motivation to attend college,
graduate and professional school applicants must directly address
in their essays their desire to study their selected field.
You must now
confront the underlying problem of the admissions essay. You must
now consider topics that will allow you to synthesize your important
personal characteristics and experiences into a coherent whole while
simultaneously addressing your desire to attend a specific institution.
While most admissions essays allow great latitude in topic selection,
you must also be sure to answer the questions that were asked of
you. Leaving a lasting impression on someone who reads 50-100 essays
a day will not be easy, but we have compiled some guidelines to
help you get started. With any luck, one or two topics, with small
changes, will allow you to answer application questions for 5-7
different colleges, although admissions officers do appreciate essays
that provide convincing evidence of how an applicant will fit into
a particular academic environment. You should at least have read
the college's webpage, admissions catalog, and have an understanding
of the institution's strengths.
Consider
the following questions before proceeding:
- Have you
selected a topic that describes something of personal importance
in your life, with which you can use vivid personal experiences
as supporting details?
- Is your
topic a gimmick? That is, do you plan to write your essay in iambic
pentameter or make it funny. You should be very, very careful
if you are planning to do this. We recommend strongly that you
do not do this. Almost always, this is done poorly and is not
appreciated by the admissions committee. Nothing is worse than
not laughing or not being amused at something that was written
to be funny or amusing.
- Will your
topic only repeat information listed elsewhere on your application?
If so, pick a new topic. Dont mention GPAs or standardized
test scores in your essay.
- Can you offer
vivid supporting paragraphs to your essay topic? If you cannot
easily think of supporting paragraphs with concrete examples,
you should probably choose a different essay topic.
- Can you fully
answer the question asked of you? Can you address and elaborate
on all points within the specified word limit, or will you end
up writing a poor summary of something that might be interesting
as a report or research paper? If you plan on writing something
technical for college admissions, make sure you truly can back
up your interest in a topic and are not merely throwing around
big scientific words. Unless you convince the reader that you
actually have the life experiences to back up your interest in
neurobiology, the reader will assume you are trying to impress
him/her with shallow tactics. Also, be sure you can write to admissions
officers and that you are not writing over their heads.
- Can you keep
the reader's interest from the first word. The entire essay must
be interesting, considering admissions officers will probably
only spend a few minutes reading each essay.
- Is your topic
overdone? To ascertain this, peruse through old essays. EssayEdge's
100 free essays can help you do this. However, most topics are
overdone, and this is not a bad thing. A unique or convincing
answer to a classic topic can pay off big.
- Will your
topic turnoff a large number of people? If you write on how everyone
should worship your God, how wrong or right abortion is, or how
you think the Republican or Democratic Party is evil, you will
not get into the college of your choice. The only thing worse
than not writing a memorable essay is writing an essay that will
be remembered negatively. Stay away from specific religions, political
doctrines, or controversial opinions. You can still write an essay
about Nietzsche's influence on your life, but express understanding
that not all intelligent people will agree with Nietzsche's claims.
Emphasize instead Nietzsche's influence on your life, and not
why you think he was wrong or right in his claims.
- In this vein,
if you are presenting a topic that is controversial, you must
acknowledge counter arguments without sounding arrogant.
- Will an admissions
officer remember your topic after a day of reading hundreds of
essays? What will the officer remember about your topic? What
will the officer remember about you? What will your lasting impression
be?
After evaluating
your essay topics with the above criteria and asking for the free
opinions of EssayEdge editors, of your teachers or colleagues, and
of your friends, you should have at least 1-2 interesting essay
topics. Consider the following guidelines below.
1. If
you are planning on writing an essay on how you survived poverty
in Russia, your mother's suicide, your father's kidnapping, or your
immigration to America from Asia, you should be careful that your
main goal is to address your own personal qualities. Just because
something sad or horrible has happened to you does not mean that
you will be a good college or graduate school student. You don't
want to be remembered as the pathetic applicant. You want to be
remembered as the applicant who showed impressive qualities under
difficult circumstances. It is for this reason that essays relating
to this topic are considered among the best. Unless you only use
the horrible experience as a lens with which to magnify your own
personal characteristics, you will not write a good essay. Graduate
and professional school applicants should generally steer clear
of this topic altogether unless you can argue that your experience
will make you a better businessman, doctor, lawyer, or scholar.
2. Essays
should fit in well with the rest of a candidate's application, explaining
the unexplained and steering clear of that which is already obvious.
For example, if you have a 4.0 GPA and a 1500 SAT, no one doubts
your ability to do the academic work and addressing this topic would
be ridiculous. However, if you have an 850 SAT and a 3.9 GPA or
a 1450 SAT and a 2.5 GPA, you would be wise to incorporate in your
essay an explanation for the apparent contradiction. For example,
perhaps you were hospitalized or family concerns prevented your
dedication to academics; you would want to mention this in your
essay. However, do not make your essay one giant excuse. Simply
give a quick, convincing explanation within the framework of your
larger essay.
3. "Diversity"
is the biggest buzzword of the 1990's. Every college, professional
school, or graduate school wants to increase diversity. For this
reason, so many applicants are tempted to declare what makes them
diverse. However, simply saying you are a black, lesbian female
will not impress admissions officers in the least. While an essay
incorporating this information would probably be your best topic
idea, you must finesse the issue by addressing your own personal
qualities and how you overcame stigma, dealt with social ostracism,
etc. If you are a rich student from Beverly Hills whose father is
an engineer and whose mother is a lawyer, but you happen to be a
minority, an essay about how you dealt with adversity would be unwise.
You must demonstrate vividly your personal qualities, interests,
motivations, etc. Address specifically how your diversity will contribute
to the realm of campus opinion, the academic environment, and social
life.
4. Don't
mention weaknesses unless you absolutely need to explain them away.
You want to make a positive first impression, and telling an admissions
officer anything about drinking, drugs, partying, etc. undermines
your goal. EssayEdge editors have read more essays on ADD (Attention
Deficit Disorder) than we would ever have imagined. Why admit to
weakness when you can instead showcase your strengths?
5. Be
honest, but not for honesty's sake. Unless you are a truly excellent
writer, your best, most passionate writing will be about events
that actually occurred. While you might be tempted to invent hardship,
it is completely unnecessary. Write an essay about your life that
demonstrates your personality.
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